Directions: Read and examine an excerpt of a book review written by a Grade 11 student for her Reading and Writing class.

...I don't think that the author of the book gave justice to the characters. I was appalled with the idea that Sienna died at the end. It was heart-breaking. I cried my heart out as I finished reading the book. The book became my new favorite and I don't think I will be able to love another book as much as I love this one...

Questions:
1. Is her choice of words appropriate for a book review? Why or why not?

2. Point out 3 words that are inappropriate. Suggest a more appropriate alternative for each word.

3. What do you think should she do to improve her writing task?​